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English First Peoples page feedback

Mum:

-Clear navigation, and links work well

-Text is easy to read

-A mistake in texts

-Add more images

-Less texts

Friend:

-Looks a bit boring

English Literary Studies page feedback

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Colours

-Does not use a harmonious colour palette

-Implementation of colour contrast provides great readability

-Colors work well with topic and subject

​Images & Illustrations

-Images have great quality

-Images are relevant up to certain a extend

-Images are not responsive

-No supporting texts are provided with visuals

Layout & Composition

-Graphic distribution is disproportionate

-Ample white space with minimal clutters

-Clear visual hierarchy

-Grid alignment is precise and consistent

Typography

-Include some differences between fonts

-Fonts are highly readable

-Clear hierarchy with correct sizing and spacing

-Consistent font usage

​Tone & Content Presentation

-Writing is mostly jargon-free

-Scannability is limited due to minimal usage of bullet points

-Maintained consistent tone for the majority of the texts

Interaction Between Text & Graphics

-Images do not lead eye to related text and distract users

-Images are balanced but not contrasting

-Texts and image are both well spaced and aligned

Title

-Clear

-Concise

-Relevant

-Demonstrate the central idea of articles

Introduction

-No introduction visible in all paragraphs

-No thesis statement in any paragraph

Definition and Scope

-Clear

-Comprehensive

-Detailed explanation of topics

Importance and Relevance

-Describes why the subject matters academically

-Does not include applications and interdisciplinary connections

-In short, does not link what you learn to practical uses or show how various fields of knowledge interact with each other

Learning Outcomes or Objectives

-Clearly outlines specific skills

-Knowledge

-Critical thinking students gain from the subject

Recent Developments or Examples

-Does not include trends

-Technologies

-Case studies are not highly relevant and engaging

Conclusion

-Few summaries

-Does not apply conclusion effectively to all paragraphs

-Does not reinforce importance

-Does not mention future outlook

Style and Format

-Tone is kept mostly formal and informative

-Not very engaging tone

-Language is mostly clear and concise with minimal jargon

-Poor flow and transition

-Citations are not included

How to improve

​-Use a wider variety of colours that contrast or complement one another

-Implement visuals that support and align wth texts

-Apply more bullet points to reduce paragraph sizes

-Include introduction and conclusion to important pargraphs

​-Give more examples for readers to easily comprehend and build relations with texts

-Provide citations to works (articles)

English Literary Studies page feedback

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