Liam Jin
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English First Peoples page feedback
Mum:
-Clear navigation, and links work well
-Text is easy to read
-A mistake in texts
-Add more images
-Less texts
Friend:
-Looks a bit boring
English Literary Studies page feedback




Colours
-Does not use a harmonious colour palette
-Implementation of colour contrast provides great readability
-Colors work well with topic and subject
​Images & Illustrations
-Images have great quality
-Images are relevant up to certain a extend
-Images are not responsive
-No supporting texts are provided with visuals
Layout & Composition
-Graphic distribution is disproportionate
-Ample white space with minimal clutters
-Clear visual hierarchy
-Grid alignment is precise and consistent
Typography
-Include some differences between fonts
-Fonts are highly readable
-Clear hierarchy with correct sizing and spacing
-Consistent font usage
​Tone & Content Presentation
-Writing is mostly jargon-free
-Scannability is limited due to minimal usage of bullet points
-Maintained consistent tone for the majority of the texts
Interaction Between Text & Graphics
-Images do not lead eye to related text and distract users
-Images are balanced but not contrasting
-Texts and image are both well spaced and aligned
Title
-Clear
-Concise
-Relevant
-Demonstrate the central idea of articles
Introduction
-No introduction visible in all paragraphs
-No thesis statement in any paragraph
Definition and Scope
-Clear
-Comprehensive
-Detailed explanation of topics
Importance and Relevance
-Describes why the subject matters academically
-Does not include applications and interdisciplinary connections
-In short, does not link what you learn to practical uses or show how various fields of knowledge interact with each other
Learning Outcomes or Objectives
-Clearly outlines specific skills
-Knowledge
-Critical thinking students gain from the subject
Recent Developments or Examples
-Does not include trends
-Technologies
-Case studies are not highly relevant and engaging
Conclusion
-Few summaries
-Does not apply conclusion effectively to all paragraphs
-Does not reinforce importance
-Does not mention future outlook
Style and Format
-Tone is kept mostly formal and informative
-Not very engaging tone
-Language is mostly clear and concise with minimal jargon
-Poor flow and transition
-Citations are not included
How to improve
​-Use a wider variety of colours that contrast or complement one another
-Implement visuals that support and align wth texts
-Apply more bullet points to reduce paragraph sizes
-Include introduction and conclusion to important pargraphs
​-Give more examples for readers to easily comprehend and build relations with texts
-Provide citations to works (articles)
English Literary Studies page feedback



